M/E: midpoint and endpoint words.
The presence of a refrain, as well as a repetition of similar sounds constructs a sense of continuity and lyricism in Moses Ibn’s Ezra’s “at the hour of closing”. For example, there is a repetition of the “לָה” (la) sounds preceding the two-word refrain – i.e., each midpoint word – ending every couplet: בִּשְׁעַת הַנְּעִילָה / this night. Also, there are alternating “לָה” or “ה” (ha) and “ם”(m) sounds (except for 15, 13, 11, 5) at each first line’s last word per each stroph.
This continuity of sounds inspired me to identify a sequence of midpoint and endpoint words, the points at which the pattern occurs. A midpoint word is a the word before the sentence’s comma division, and an endpoint word is a word before the sentence’s period. Each line has word pair highlighting both positions; word pairs typically captured the stroph’s overall philosophical or religious meaning. For example, stroph 2’s sequence illustrates the experience of being summoned into a spiritual obligation (called… raise…) and experiencing reverence (exalted… closing), which the stroph itself clearly conveys: “We who few have been from yore, Raise our eyes to heaven’s height, / Trembling, fearful in our prayer, As Your gates are closed this night.”
Stroph 1
Endpoints.
Bring about, causing1.
Closing (Sefaria).
.עֲלִילָה
.הַנְּעִילָה
Stroph 2
Midpoint / Endpoint
.קְרוּאִים… נוֹשְׂאִים
.בְּחִילָה… הַנְּעִילָה
Stroph 3
Midpoint / Endpoint
pour out (our) (Sefaria)…
Pardoning4… Closing.
.שׁוֹפְכִים… וְכַחְשַׁם
.מְחִילָה… הַנְּעִילָה
Stroph 4
Midpoint / Endpoint
Refuge… Dreadful Plight (Sefaria).
CompassionA… Closing.
.לְסִתְרָה… מִמְּאֵרָה
.וּלְגִילָה… הַנְּעִילָה
Stroph 5
Midpoint / Endpoint
Stroph 6
Midpoint / Endpoint
Generations (Sefaria) / Fathers… DaysA.
?… Closing.
אֲבִיהֶם… יְמֵיהֶם
.וּתְחִלָּה… הַנְּעִילָה
Stroph 7
Midpoint / Endpoint
Grace divine… flock (Sefaria).
Zion’s rebuilt site (Sefaria) Samaria8… Closing.
רָצוֹן… הַצֹּאן
.וְאָהֳלָה… הַנְּעִילָה
Stroph 8
Midpoint / Endpoint
Greatness9… old.
Rejoicing… Closing (Sefaria).
.רַבּוֹת… וְהָאָבוֹת
.וּבְצָהֳלָה… הַנְּעִילָה
Stroph 9
Midpoint / Endpoint
Israel… Gabriel.
Kindred, Redemption10… Closing.
.יִשְׂרָאֵל… וְגַבְרִיאֵל
.הַגְּאֻלָּה… הַנְּעִילָה